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miércoles, 11 de agosto de 2010

Denial (Return the Blow)

Kind disdain
Benign neglect
Every whisper
said out loud
Laughing out loud
  I say you're a monster
      You say I'm a fiend
          a fiend?
A field in the moon?
         You stare
I dare
      We care
           They snare
I could
but shouldn't
you should
but won't
We want to make things better
     sweeten the bitter
             soften the blow
but we will never
not ever
find peace.

5 comentarios:

  1. I TRULLY TRULLY LOVED THIS poem,
    enserio, una vez q comprendi cada cosa :P
    hahaha dije Oh dios mio... este poema es mio! haha
    enserio i made it mine

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  2. y hoy le alle aun mas sabor a ese poema... enserio me enamore de el...i already dedicated this poem btw. lol thanks for it haha

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  3. ok i fuked up my comment and somehow deleted it xD i am still to learn a lot about blogger anyway, my point: thanks for the comments kiddo they meant a lot xD!

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  4. Exactly what stage in life are you in, dear poet?
    Hope is a thing with feathers...now is not the time to moldt.

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